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 21 
 on: December 21, 2008, 08:23:14 am 
Started by Seer Fox - Last post by EightyEight
I'm now checking for recent posts semi-regularly.

 22 
 on: December 18, 2008, 08:31:52 pm 
Started by Seer Fox - Last post by Insomniac
Hey Kentai, it's been a while.

I still poke my head in here from time to time, though it's been a while since I've had the time to read or write much...

J.

 23 
 on: December 18, 2008, 12:51:43 pm 
Started by watty - Last post by Kentai


He sprinted in crying..
He could be dying…
A cough and a splutter…
A cringe and a shudder…
Appeared in a dash…
Maybe a rash??
Germs and the sick…
Go get help quick!
Kicking and screaming…
Hopelessly bleeding!
The dangerously ill…
Life almost nil…
A deadly disease!
It was only…..a sneeze   

This is the only one that ticks with me, but I like it. All apart from the first line. I can't help but think there should be a comma.
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He sprinted in, crying..
But that aside it's.... fun.

ps. Please also excuse the late reply and lack of ideas for names.

 24 
 on: December 18, 2008, 12:10:20 pm 
Started by Seer Fox - Last post by Kentai
Just so y'all know I'm not dead. Just been reviewing my old shizzums that I've found in the hidden depths of my hard drive and thinking about starting one particular story up again. Anyone else still visit these here lands much anymore?

 25 
 on: November 13, 2008, 04:37:47 am 
Started by Seer Fox - Last post by padrepio
Amigos, a pleasant day to all. I don't know if anybody still knows me here.  Grin I would like to apologize also for being away for soooo long. Work is what hinders me to take up the pen and write. Additionally, I've been guilty of a little bit of procrastination. hehehe...

I really would like to see OW resurrected.  Of all the forums I've been into, OW is the one that I call home.  And I missed you guys.

May I offer a suggestion? How about if we put up a website and a forum? The website is where we post the final drafts of our literary outputs. The forum is for interaction and idea sounding board. It is there where we will help each other---through comment/suggestions---finalize our literary outputs. To make the forum more interactive, I'd like to suggest this: If a writer has already  finished the final draft of his story/poem/article, he can now choose to submit it to a vote. If he gets all the nods, then the story/poem/article will be posted in the website. Just a piece of my mind, amigos.  Smiley

So, whatever your future plans, please count me in. Just send me a message.

 26 
 on: November 11, 2008, 01:14:53 am 
Started by Agrigging - Last post by Agrigging
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 27 
 on: November 10, 2008, 08:01:54 pm 
Started by Seer Fox - Last post by EightyEight
I've also got to apologise and offer the weak excuse that 'I was doing my homework'. I think the biggest problem here was that the entire forum relied on a few key people - and when they became inactive, due to entirely sensible reasons, everything sort of fell apart. So I think a priority for a revamp should include much more publicity or whatever (attracting new peoples!).
The concept of having a sounding-board is a great idea, and I'd agree in saying that I haven't seen it done before. And the diagnosis of needing specific critique questions is accurate - it is always kind of hard to just try and rate someone's work in general. The 'how to review fiction' link was a great help, but frankly, I often had to force most of the categories out - it's just hard to write about everything.
So just to add my two cents - I'd love a revamped OW. Whether I'd be a great contributer is another question, and th answer is 'probably no'. Partly, I have to do my homework, and partly... well, actually, that's basically the reason Tongue. Though if the activities were less time-intensive, I may contribute far more often.

 28 
 on: November 07, 2008, 01:01:20 pm 
Started by Insomniac - Last post by Insomniac
Yeah, it's pretty much a write up of what the player wanted for the character... this being her first character ever, it was full of cliches.

I tried to weed some out, but when they're so thick, it was pretty hard to get them all...  Smiley

Thanks for reading and reviewing after all this time.

J.

 29 
 on: November 06, 2008, 11:35:26 pm 
Started by Seer Fox - Last post by Seer Fox
Oh and Seer, a pm to me would have triggered a notification email and I would have been aware of this sooner.


...Oh yeah.

Well at any rate, give me a week or so and we'll see what I can do. I imagine large swathes of this board will need to be deleted or stored away. I should probably put my mind as to 'what', and then work on what else needs doing after the fact; a new board or two, rules for the rating system, perhaps...

Ciat,
Seer Fox

 30 
 on: November 04, 2008, 09:07:16 pm 
Started by Seer Fox - Last post by Seer Fox
The Facebook idea has more sense behind it, but I myself don't have an account. I suppose I could make one; my brother's been nagging me about it for the past year anyhow.

Ciat,
Seer Fox

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