pink monkey bird
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« on: May 09, 2008, 05:36:27 pm » |
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why is it thast we readily accept what we cannot understand?
why is it that we doubt that we can?
why do we kick stones down the road?
why do we not kick dogs?
why are people afraid of spiders,
but the earth isn't afraid of people?
why is arithmatic singular,
yet mathmatics plural?
why do we not question these things?
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Dream, there is alot to be said for dreams, even if theres is no chance it will come true. There is comfort in the knowledge you can still dream of it. Nothing great was acomplished without detailed planning, no plan was ever drawn up without a dream of an acomplishment. They did not build the apollo rockets until after man dreamed of reaching out and touching the stars. How? How is irrelevant, as long as there is a why, and the why can be simply "I want to!", the how will be worked out later.
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« Reply #1 on: May 12, 2008, 10:15:27 pm » |
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not much rythm, at least not that I could see any way.
I think it whould be what not that in the second line, but thats probably just me.
In answer to a few questions, kicking dogs would be harsh (aka animal protection would be down on us like anything). We kick stones because we can (no stone protection society round here that I know of). Not every one is afraid of spiders, and how do you know how the earth feels - have you talked to it lately?
Mathematics is the study of everything mathematical, arithmatic is just a branch off of that.
Oh and obviously someone is questioning them - YOU.
Well done. It's nice to see some new work, sorry it took so long to get back to you.
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Seer Fox
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« Reply #2 on: May 15, 2008, 09:12:33 am » |
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Why are there so many questions?
Is this supposed to be serious?
I thought we'd gone over these topics in your poems before?
Why do I even bother to ask?
Why have I just wasted precious seconds of my life looking at your work?
I guess we'll never know.
Ciat,
Seer Fox
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pink monkey bird
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« Reply #3 on: May 15, 2008, 09:09:42 pm » |
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hang on, i think i've finally figured out why we don't see eye to eye seer. do you really believe that anything i put up here is SERIOUS?
i cannot honestly remember the last time i ever took anything seriously. much less anything of my own creation.
in answer to your questions
because i'm bored
hell no
yes, yes we have
because you have too much time on your hands
see above.
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Dream, there is alot to be said for dreams, even if theres is no chance it will come true. There is comfort in the knowledge you can still dream of it. Nothing great was acomplished without detailed planning, no plan was ever drawn up without a dream of an acomplishment. They did not build the apollo rockets until after man dreamed of reaching out and touching the stars. How? How is irrelevant, as long as there is a why, and the why can be simply "I want to!", the how will be worked out later.
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« Reply #4 on: May 16, 2008, 08:43:53 am » |
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Well, not taking it seriously would certainly explain why your poetry is so terrible at least.
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