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Amanda's Lament (WIP)

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« on: April 10, 2007, 01:41:05 am »

I understand that my sentances are short and yes, I do need some more adjectives. But what do you mean by using 'enters' between paragraphs?

I really did mean to make it a love story, though it does sound like it many ways.

I found this site by email. I did some writing here a few years ago actually it was a different forum back then.  Although I can see it has the same font for it's banner which is still cool.
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