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Sol and Centauri (all new!) [light language]

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Tau Worlock
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« on: May 01, 2007, 11:20:11 am »

Another rewrite?

The opening looks ok, much like you previous openings, a bit of history of your world tolled in real time. It was a new scene so that nice to read. Those this mean you are doing a complete new start or are you keeping characters and plot similar?

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