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Sol and Centauri (all new!) [light language]

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« on: June 16, 2007, 10:21:52 am »

The way I see it Peter just discovered the time capsules buried earlier in the story. What will he find inside? Smiley

Reads well, canít see any mistakes. Both bits are relatively quiet scenes compared to the usual combat scenes, a refreshing change. Keep working, you have a readership that is waiting for the next pit. Evil
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