Very impressive. The story is vibrant and descriptive. The characters all have depth and substance. It's a really well written piece of story telling, even in the infant state that it's in.
My one question I might have... when the aliens attack the station in your opening chapter, you mention the alien ships making extreme-G maneuvers that would kill a human pilot. In the absense of gravity, would evasive maneuvers have the same effect on the human body as a fighter flying within an atmosphere? I realise that directional thrust of a craft could have an effect on the body, but provided a pilto was properly restrained, wouldn't a zero-G enviroment prevent some of the severity of your organs being moved about?
Perhaps it's been too many years since I took physics...just looking for some clarity.
J.
