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H2O (what would have become my second book - major WIP)

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« on: May 22, 2007, 07:51:54 pm »

It's looking really, really good. I'm loving the story and the sci-fi world you've set up, even though it wouldn't be my personal choice. I really don't have much to criticise. There are some little grammatical hiccups here and there, but nothing which is terribly upsetting. I can go through them all if you really want me to, but they really aren't critical.
I'm looking forward to more of this already Smiley
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