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H2O (what would have become my second book - major WIP)

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Tau Worlock
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« on: May 26, 2007, 01:27:23 pm »

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After Control had cleared them, Dax en Rachel took back on their gas until they had lined up with the hangar bay entrance and the two bay doors had opened.
Should the en be and?

Any way looks good, since Kyraís body has not been found I have to suspect that she is still alive. How or why I donít know but the plot possibilities are interesting.
And do write more, please.
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