H2O (what would have become my second book - major WIP)

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Re: H2O (what would have become my second book - major WIP)

« on: May 27, 2007, 12:50:25 pm »

Lol, 'en' is Dutch for 'and'... Grin

I'll wait a while for the corrections, as Bakerman has offered to check the whole lot. Would be a shame to double check. Wink

As for Kyra, well, she might yet be alive. Who knows? Roll Eyes

I've started with chapter 6 again, but I've noticed that I need to get back in the story again first. Anyway, there is still hope for H2O!

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